Wednesday, 23 May 2018

The Time I Saved Everyone From A Disease

Hello my name is Agueer and I will be sharing a story about when I saved everyone from a disease. It was back in 1952 when it all started...

So it was a sunny day and was walking down the street and I just pasted the hospital in the south of Miami. Just when I walked all the way past the hospital this man coughed. The more I was passing people the more I would hear coughs. Then I turned around looking directly at the hospital and saw all those people walking into the hospital. I went back and into the hospital and saw an old woman in a room lying on the bed. I was about to walk away when I overheard the doctor and the old woman's conversation, he said to her "Vanessa you have Homorphomia cancer just like most of the people here and if you know anyone who has been coughing a lot send them here" Vanessa replied saying "There are a couple of people I know who cough a lot". After their conversation I got out of the hospital and walked to a shop and had some pepperoni pizza.

The Search
When I arrived home I searched up different types of cancer and found the exact one the doctor was talking about, it read "Hormophomia Cancer, Homorphomia cancer is a very spread able cancer. When you get Homorphomia you cough a lot and if you don't get checked out straight away you may die". I said "I have to help them even if it doesn't work well at least I tried" so I planned something for 6 weeks and that week on Thursday was the day I did it. During my planning time I made this potion it was made from blackberries grass and fish, so first what I did was I went near that hospital ad took a plant out from under my arm and a woman coughed on it then I went home and went to my backyard. I simply squeezed a few drops of the potion into the plant and then five seconds later... I became a miracle worker. It felt good to help the plants so I took it in the next day.

The Blessing
The next day I took it in and saw a doctor named Kylie, she was very supportive and asked me to show her, when I showed her the experiment she said "Wow I will let you work on Miss Smith" "who's Miss Smith" "she is the old lady in ward 2 number 12" so I went to her room. She was asleep and the doctors told me "Go on do your thing" then I shot the needle in her. She woke up and jumped out of her room joyfully and we all cheered. So after I shot every patient I was rewarded with a $500,000 shopping spree, I was so blessed that day and also my budget is still going even after 3 years it is at $200,000.

Thank you for listening to my story and I hope you enjoyed it feel free to give back some feed back.


  1. Agueer that was a great story on the Stornack Cancer. My favourite part in the story was when you shot the first patient with your experiment. I also liked that you got $500,000 to go on a shopping spree! I think you should publish this story into ToiToi. Keep up the good work!

  2. Hello Agueer I enjoyed reading that story my medal for you is the part you healed everyone from the cancer however my mission for you is to add more detail by saying when I took a bite of the pepperoni pizza it taste weird.

  3. Hello Agueer. I really enjoyed reading your story because it had lots of detail and it was exciting. My favourite part in the story was when you created your experiment, to help save everyone from the disease. Good job!

  4. Kia Orana Agueer, love your story. I loved how you got awarded over $400,00 dollars. Your story is unbelievably amazing! I wonder if you can make a part two where you become a doctor.